homework 9/11

http://blog.al.com/times -views/2011/09/911_anniversary_a_day_to_honor.html

(above is the link to the blog i read for this homework assignment)

this author was very different from the author who wrote in the New Yorker. throughtout the new yorker the author connected , used vivid description and made it so the reader actually felt as if they were in the situation. in this article the author basically informs more than states his own opinion in the artilc. in this article the author does a good job with connecting itself with the reader ass well. it uses little words like we , and us to make it seem like the author is actually having a conversation with you. i liked this piece but feel that the author could have added a little more "spice" into this editoral .